Review Detail of Winter_Whisperer in I was reincarnated and all I have is a book?!!? [Dropped]

Item: I was reincarnated and all I have is a book?!!? [Dropped]
Rating: 3.4

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Winter_WhispererLv42yrWinter_Whisperer

It's not that bad of fanfic. It just needs a lot of polishing to do. My advice is to get an editor. Most of the story seems like a list of things happening and there isn't a proper flow to the story. The characters could be fleshed out a bit more for better enjoyment as it seems like they are more 2d than real-life characters. The 'book' needs a better in-depth explanation rather than a tool of convenience. If you fix all the above mention points I think this could be a wonderful read. Keep up the good work👍

I was reincarnated and all I have is a book?!!? [Dropped]

Lord_Banned

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Lord_BannedAutorLord_Banned

Thank you for your review, I will try my best to solve these problems.

2yr

Lord_BannedAutorLord_Banned

I understand what you mean, I’v been focusing the story around Mineta only that it seems that everyone else is a 2d character so I will try to change that to the best of my abilities.

2yr

MegaMachoLv6MegaMacho

Also, In dialogues, you usually forget about capital letters at the beginning of the sentences, right after the " " And the pontuation is a bit messy.

Lord_Banned:Thank you for your review, I will try my best to solve these problems.

2yr