It's a good story overall, but the main character is flat. The mc is only interested in the money and doing as little work as possible. How can you get attached to a character who has no ambitions...?
polarfox369
Liked it!
GOSTARThank you for your review, I really appreciate it. And yeah, I admit that the main character did have no ambitions about his career. (And maybe have or maybe not in the future, I don't know.) And he did indeed only interested in the money and doing as little work as possible. But if you are to expect the main character to be a 'perfect' kind from the start. Then I can only say sorry to you in advance because, for me, I intended to write the main character as a 'flawed' character. He will grow in his own way in the future. That's why I put the tag [weaktostrong] here for this novel.
Also, if I need to describe the current main character myself. I will say he was a two-sided character. On the one hand, he would be lazy, interested in money, pretentious, etc. most of the time. Simply put, he was a complete waste. But on the other hand, when it was time to be serious, he would be more serious than anyone else. And sometimes even to the point of being a reliable guy in the eyes of others. Yet, he himself may not notice it himself. It's just that he needs 'something' to 'trigger' this side of him to appear.
polarfox369:Thank you for your review, I really appreciate it. And yeah, I admit that the main character did have no ambitions about his career. (And maybe have or maybe not in the future, I don't know.) And he did indeed only interested in the money and doing as little work as possible. But if you are to expect the main character to be a 'perfect' kind from the start. Then I can only say sorry to you in advance because, for me, I intended to write the main character as a 'flawed' character. He will grow in his own way in the future. That's why I put the tag [weaktostrong] here for this novel.
Oh, sorry for the misunderstanding. If that is what you mean, then I can only say sorry that this novel isn't for you 'cause I still prefer to write the mc just like this, ambitionless. At least for now, and maybe or maybe not in the future, 'cause I think both are possible. For now, the mc just goes with the flow.
PkhtyVKJGUDkh:I don't say i want a "perfect" mc, but follow a ambitionless guy is boring