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The world background is a masterpiece and very detailed although I agree with one of the comments here regarding the dialogue type used in the story. I feel like I was reading the bible in the second chapter with all the names written in there, if I may, slowly introduce key characters chapter per chapter so we can just easily remember them. Nonetheless, this is an interesting read. 👏🏻

The Salvation : The legend of the westland

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Yes for the first three chaptres i tried to introduce my world to readers , i agree with you about the dialogues but all that changed after thank you your advises are precious to me