Review Detail of RandomPasserby_07 in The Eternal in Twilight

Great idea, bringing Ikaris to Twilight. And nice touch-ups with the backstory of why Arishem have to send him. I love the way you write their POV, it actually does not deviate too much from how I picture Ikaris to be in the movie eternals. Don't know in the later chapters though, with him having a kids body maybe it affect his way of thinking too. But overall it's great and looking forward to more chapters. Pls don't drop it.