Review Detail of Sweet_Vanilla553 in Girl Like Onion

Hello there an honest review from me. Your story was attractive. I read it until the end. But I got troubles when I read, because of that long paragraphs. The plot was right. But the one paragraph filled my whole screen. That was the only thing I got troubles with. Other than that love your story. I added your novel to my library. Keep it up. You can do it.👊❤