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MmMAaaSsSTeerr
MmMAaaSsSTeerrLv52yr
2022-08-20 18:22

gonna give this 5star because i like the story and there's a time skip about the renovation of the house and the restaurant but still like the story and I would like to ask if the world is still the same where he is a mafia ? and hoping ur not gonna drop this story

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SMwrites
SMwritesAuthor

thanks for the review! and yes, the world is the same.

MmMAaaSsSTeerr
MmMAaaSsSTeerrLv5

dang hoping to his old crew not gonna betrayed him and imagine when he gonna build a Yakuza group his other group gonna supply him a weapon

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NeroUmu
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One of the first mafia novels I have ever read so if I say some stupid stuff I am sorry First off, writing quality. Fair warning I am not very privy to small details when I am reading. So far (33 chapters) the writing quality has been great. Little to no mistakes (that I noticed) and even the small mistakes that I spotted (like two) barely affected my reading so great job there author! Five stars Updating stability- Just started reading today so no idea about this. Story development- Over the course of the story, many interesting events continued to happen and the actions the mc and other charcters took were very interesting and kept me very engaged. Again very well executed author. Five stars Character design- I would go into detail about all the little things that I liked but that would spoil the story so I won’t. However I will say that the challenges and things that head towards the mc and how it develops not only him but the people around him is very pleasing to read. Five stars World background- Since we are only 33 chapters in and the world seems very much based on the real world (which makes sense really) no complaints here. Not only that but the way the world is slowly developed alongside the mc’s life and escapades make the story so much more interesting since you never know what new thing will show up next. Five stars All in all, a very interesting and pleasing story to rear with its own charm perfectly executed. Also the way the author showcases the intelligence and cunning of the mc and his skills as a mafia leader is very well done amking the story that much more exciting. 10/10 Last and final point, Nero cause Nero. Nero approves.

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