The opening of the story and the pace of the novel was efficiently maintained. The only thing that I was a bit disappointed about were the punctuation errors. The majority of them were there in the first chapter, if you could edit them out. On a wider basis, the character's traits were realistic and the plot was an interesting one as well. Good job author!
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