Review Detail of BlazeSpirit in My Farm System: Reaching The Top In The Parallel Earth!

The characters in this novel are quite 1-dimensional and flat. The grammar doesn’t have mistakes normally, but that’s all you can expect from it. Definitely not mind blowing. The world, however, is so far pretty interesting. The system is pretty much what you would expect. It says not BL in the story description, but you can definitely tell the author is gay by how he describes the Captain. It feels like he’s really trying to make the MC not gay, but is failing miserably, since no sane straight person would think/act the way the Mc does. It might be an attempt at a running joke, but I haven’t found any of the ‘gay’ stuff funny so far. Overall not bad, but room for some improvement. (Not that I would be able to make anything better myself, it is much easier to criticize than create)