It's good and I like it, the grammar is pretty much okay and the plot is good. updating stability is good. Character design... the characters are okay for now. I'm glad it's got a harem.
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thank you so much for reviewing my novel i will do my best
yeah I really agree with you
isn't oukoku e tsuzuku michi is the name of the novel. there is even a manga of it