Review Detail of Ash_RoSe in Becoming A Forbidden Mage In A Parallel World

The story is very predictable. maybe a good novel for an inexperienced reader . predictability is not the only problem. Mc reacts stupid and childish. He can't hide anything. She trusts very easily. He probably wouldn't have survived without the plot armor you gave him. Things like changing the mc's personality later are also nonsense, no one has that much time unless it's a very good story. Also, the story is very similar to a certain manga (I'm not saying it as a slander, but it caught my attention) that the Chinese main character uses 4 elements. the one whose brother is a wheelchair. Anyway, as I said, this story doesn't suit me, but it's still a good read for those who want to read it. (I normally don't read 10 chapters and critique, but really, I have limited patience for an MC who is so stupid, obsessed with being a hero and acts childish) who wants to read can read. I will give an average score in order not to decrease the score, otherwise I would give it much lower. Finally, there is no comedy tag in the story for those who look at the comedy and say enjoy the adventure etc.