Review Detail of Malak_Aziz in Behind my eyes

Good start Keep going We are waiting We gain a sense of characters' different personalities, views, quirks (everyone has their own voice) Dialogue serves the story (characters don't just sit around telling each other what they had for breakfast) Dialogue deepens or develops connections between characters such as conflict and other emotional elements. We gain a sense of characters' different personalities, views, quirks (everyone has their own voice) Dialogue serves the story (characters don't just sit around telling each other what they had for breakfast) Dialogue deepens or develops connections between characters such as conflict and other emotional elements.