Review Detail of utter_curiosity in The Fateful Uchiha

Thanks for the feedback. The big controversy that I've noticed so far from the different feedback is about the MC. And I agree with those who do not like him. It's obvious why by reading the story. However, for me it's also what set him apart from other type of MCs. And it would be interesting to see how he develops.

the problem is that the MC has already gone through many close calls and still you don't develop his character, the number of contradictions is exaggerated, I really like the concept of your novel, but I feel that you are delaying the character development too much, it's not that it is fast or slow because of the number of episodes, it is slow because it has already had many close calls and in none of it does it develop, what is more, it is even more self-conscious, reality has already struck too many times, I say all this because it seriously seems like a good fic, I understand the importance of character development, but it's killing the fic, I wouldn't mind if he remained passive for another 30 episodes, but that would be if he hadn't had so many reality checks.

but I don't think you understand a person who goes through trauma doesn't immediately recover say what you will but he is going through so much trauma people don't just automatically go "oh yeah I have to work harder" when a giant fox has murdered their dad in front of them and the image is literally burned into their memories he is traumatised and acts like a real person does you want a machine but this mc is merely human

then it was better if he wasnt a reincarnator