Review Detail of Gin_toki_v2 in The Fateful Uchiha

Item: The Fateful Uchiha
Rating: 4.8

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Gin_toki_v2Lv42yrGin_toki_v2

It's a good fanfic, only problem with this is there is too much monologing. Author go to YouTube a search "how to show not tell" it will help you improve your writing .

The Fateful Uchiha

MilexKor

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Respostas3

MilexKorAutorMilexKor

Thank you for the feedback. I will work on improving it.

2yr

Young_fruit_SmileyLv14Young_fruit_Smiley

yeah, tips in that vid are quite good.... !!!😉☺️

2yr

Dame_Desu_YoLv4Dame_Desu_Yo

Good feedback, keep up the good to author

1yr