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Review Detail of Poet_Legion in Manaless Mage

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The real problem with this novel is the over.Focus on side characters. I don't mean that the author speaks about side characters. A couple chapters every few chapters. Know that's normal. What I mean is a fight between 2 side characters. That have no correlation to the main character or the story in any way other than the fact that they're mages have A. 7 or 10 chapter fight scene.That is very repetitive and very born. Even. When the main character gets in a fight, it drags on for way too long. Every single conflict that the character gets into does not need to be described for 5 or 6 paragraphs solely when it comes down to the fighting aspect period It's like I'm reading a book where someone needs to describe. Every tree and and it gets so boring and repetitive that the really cool aspect of the novel gets ruined. There's not many out there where a person who can't use Mana and's up becoming a Mage matter.Of fact i've never heard a book really like this one but the author's over description of every single fighting really makes it boring and repetitive. That doesn't mean I want to 3 paragraph fights.I mean, every single fight that the main character gets in.Shouldn't go for at minimum 2 chapters.If not more depending on how quote on quote story critical it is. Like this, novel has a really cool concept and honestly everything. Besides the overdescription of main characters, fight scenes and side fights. It's a good novel so much though. That I didn't want to stop reading UN till. About a 160 chapters in where the fight seems somehow managed to get more boring and even longer because at least in the beginning. The main character only had a couple skills so it wasn't 8. Chapters of the author throwing out a skill name, followed by the description of what the skill did to the enemy. I've seen it and in some novels that is also the case. However, it doesn't happen. for 8 chapters straight

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