Review Detail of Orphus in Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood

This is a biased review, I'll get that out of the way, this all comes from my heart and is in no way at all objective. I hate the beginning, how he lost. I came here from "My Hollywood System" and was hoping for a similar experience. A meteoric rise where the MC uses his system to completely blow everyone away and become renowned as an unparalleled prodigal genius. That's what system to me is about, an overwhelming advantage that allows someone to run. far ahead and beyond anyone else, reaching peaks none ever thought possible. The struggle and challenges you put in the story just seemed fake. Completely artificial and out of left field, and are there for no other reason that to suddenly challenge the MC rather than feeling natural. A challenge and a bit of struggle is nice every now and then, but it shouldn't undermine the overwhelming advantage presented by a Sytem.