Review Detail of Loctovia in Dual Threat Genoiss

Item: Dual Threat Genoiss
Rating: 4

Detalhe da revisão

LoctoviaLv152yrLoctovia

Well, i liked the story itself and i would say that it has a good potential. However, there are a few grammatical errors that a good proof-read can correct. Overall, i will say that 'thumbs up' author!

Dual Threat Genoiss

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VRW1AutorVRW1

Thanks. I will correct the grammar errors later on. Then come back through and tell me what you think then.

2yr