The writing isn't great. The story just feels like one big cliche. The characters feel lackluster and the mc seems childish and not particularly intelligent interesting or charismatic. The premise isn't bad though.
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GOSTARThe_Novel_Man:Thanks for the review mate, may I ask how many chapters have you read?
Thanks for reading my friend, it's a long novel and I build world and character not too fast. hope you'll enjoy reading.
SugarGodno1:I liked the story, amd it goes better with time, im glad that stuck to it