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GOHAN9000
GOHAN9000Lv152yr
2022-10-01 15:30

The story’s plot is stagnant. The author keeps repeating the same actions from the end of one chapter until the beginning of the next. A third of the story keeps getting repeated. The action is slow to develop and t]he main character hasn’t even gotten close to really starting his main mission. Feeling a little cheated reading a story I had high hopes for

Re: World Apocalypse

R_F_T_S
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324 Chs

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GOHAN9000
GOHAN9000Lv15

Why does each paragraph keep repeating the characters name and the fact that they are the strongest cadet and the leader of the group? Is this just for filler or to engrave her entire resume into our minds?

2yr
R_F_T_S
R_F_T_SAutor

Honestly, I want to apologize to you and every person that has spent money on my work. I stopped writing this work like two months ago but had to keep on updating coz of the contract requirements. My inspiration got a massive hit and I was questioning why I bothered to write a story that couldn't even get good enough promotion. You don't know how painful it is to know that it's only one person reading my work out of so many thousands on this app. But that's not your fault and I sincerely apologize for making you waste your money regardless. If there was a way to refund you, I would have done so. I hope my work doesn't ruin your desire to read books coz there are several good books on this platform. This is going to be my last work here as I'd need to take a step back to understand why I haven't been able to make a statement so far on the platform and as a writer in general. Once again I apologize and if you want, I can recommend some better novels that won't waste your time, just depends on your taste.

2yr
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89thBAMM
89thBAMMLv3

The story has a terrible sense of progression. its chapter fifty and the protagonist haven't completed a single mission given by the system....waste of my time

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R_F_T_S
R_F_T_SAutor

Alright, I'm going to act as shameless as other authors. This is my entry for WSA 2022 and I believe that I have improved a lot from my previous works. Now this is a system book but I want you guys to know that it's going to be way different from the cliches you have been subjected to so far. It's a mix of advanced technology and cultivation for one, which is obviously not a new trope, but one that I feel is not given as much attention or at least has not been done right so far. Anyway, I'll just give you guys the pros and cons based off of what I have noticed y'all enjoying on this site. Pros: No harem - This might be a pro or con based on who is reading. character development for not only the main protagonist but all those that will help him in his mission - You won't be seeing any bland side character in this story, yes sir. A world that will be fleshed out as the story progresses - This means there won't be any chapters dedicated to solely exposition. An academy arc with exciting tasks - I'm just going to give a spoiler now and inform you guys that there won't be a tournament arc, at least, not the kind of tournament that has been overdone. Passable grammar and readable tenses - Yeah I had to use Grammarly to ensure that each chapter came out with barely any mistakes, so you guys don't have to worry about getting disturbed in your immersion due to wrong grammar. There won't be romance that ends up offsetting the pace of the story, that's for sure. The story is not as linear as it seems - There will be twists and turns until the final reveal, hehe. I don't know if I'm forgetting any other pros, but I'll add it as the story progresses. Cons : No harem : As I said, this is a tricky subject. Main protagonist slowly gets the strength he needs to fight - This means that if you are looking for an instant power up, then you'd best head elsewhere. He is just a normal shut-in that somehow found himself saving the world, it wouldn't be practical if he suddenly gained the strength to beat up the enemy. The story might be slow on the action in the first twenty chapters, so yeah, that might be a con for some people. Chapter release will mostly be around two chapters per day, I don't think I can go above that. But if the support for this novel is good enough, I just might go ahead and mass release. Well, I guess that's it. I'll leave it up to you guys, the readers, to pick out other pros as well as cons that the story might possess. Don't forget to enjoy the story though, I believe it might just be an upcoming masterpiece, hehe.

2yr
DoaistDownstairs
DoaistDownstairsLv13

not bad so far, it seem unjust that it only has 3 reviews so I decided to make a review prematurely and alter it later on...................

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