Review Detail of Evara_Freya in BLOOD RUNS DEEP

Item: BLOOD RUNS DEEP
Rating: 3.2

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The story seems to be good and has good pace. The writing and vocab especially is amazing. However, the story is somewhat difficult to imagine. Author, try showing what's going on instead of telling. And can you please keep the paras short. I love the characters though, Everyone has their own looks and behaviours. Loved it! You have done a great job with that. A little faster updates please!!! [img=update]

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JN_NjaneAutorJN_Njane

Thanks for appreciating the book Evara, I will see to the points you gave. I've been working on more chapters and character personalities and from tommorow onwards there will be consistent updates. I really appreciate the love for the book and hope to give you a good story.

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