Review Detail of Bumbleboi in Twists of life

Dude..........your writing improves every passing chapter.........thats natural though.........but if you have time give a read through previous chapter and correct some of the mistakes or maybe you can make it even more impressive. The plot is actually quite chilling................ just dont give it a romance aspect please that will ruin that chill in it..................make it as manipulative as you can............thats what we lack rn............ This story is a total thrill ride