Review Detail of Kydul1137 in Blood Mage in the Apocalypse

This story is very good, especially since it’s a new writer. It starts off slow and shows that the MC actually has a life and makes it seem realistic and relatable, and then all the sudden that is ripped away as he is awakened and the real story starts. Blood manipulation is also a cool and not commonly used ability. I like the story idea and it is very good, only thing I would say is make paragraphs a bit shorter and speared them more. Other than that, the story is superb. Well done, author! 👏 keep up the good work.