Review Detail of Aliast in Tales of the Kingslayer

Hi, readers! Just a warning. I love epic stories with underlining plot themes and character developments over time. So, I don't do fastpaced story. It's going to get pretty slow for this typical genre. And, despite being a fantasy novel, I want to keep any reactions/actions taken by my MC to be as logical as possible. Apologies for any typos/editing issues. Feel free to point out any writing mistake you may see. In fact, I'd be more happy if you do, so I can improve my writing. I very much welcome comments and reviews, or anything you can offer, really. Even clicking to read is truly appreciated. Thank you for beginning this journey.