Review Detail of Lihangin in One Piece: Overlord Buggy

Item: One Piece: Overlord Buggy
Rating: 2

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LihanginLv131yrLihangin

This made my brain hurt. I mean is it as bad as the harem/ OP nonsense that seems to just be a constant on this app, no. However, it really needs some work down to its core to be read without cringing.

One Piece: Overlord Buggy

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Alekz_YNotAutorAlekz_YNot

I am sorry that I couldn't write it well enough to not hurt your brain. It is my first novel, and it is going to be really long. Thank you for the criticism, also, thank you for reading it nonetheless.

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