The fic has good potential if written correctly. There are not many twilight fanfics with Alucrad as the MC. Your decision to make the MC to have to work for more power was good, cuz we all know how ridiculously powerful Alucrad is . So if he was overpowered from the beginning the story would be boring as the plot progress. From the 3 chapters this was a nice fic . ALL THE BEST DON'T DISAPPOINT ME
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