The writing quality is pretty good overall, though there are quite a few run-on sentences and a lot of curse words. The story seems quite interesting so far, and the idea is pretty original! So far, the title seems confusing, but I'm sure it will make more sense as more chapters are released :) Keep it up, author! I can't wait to see where you take us.
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