This is review after 167 chapters... I think I've written pretty good story considering it was my first time.💪(Of course, there are many other authors who have written countless times better than I did) However, This story also has MANY flaws such as some grammatical mistakes and some inconsistency in story. If you read the story, you are welcome to criticize it and I'll try to correct and improve based on your suggestions if I find them good. ***However, there are some things which you won't like but it doesn't mean that it's sh** so don't try to judge it and read if you like if not no one gonna force you to read. Happy reading~
Blizzard54k
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GOSTARAyce_o_Spade:When you say no yuri you mean none at all correct? No waifus kissing or doing stuff to each other?
Hey Blizzard! Is there a discord group we can join? I want to contribute (proofread/fix some gramatical errors) to this novel. The story is very great and it's a shame to see the quality of the first chapters so low compared to the later ones (grammar wise, not story wise). Do let me know if there's a discord group (or your discord) I can get a hold of.
Robert_Tene_5577:Hey Blizzard! Is there a discord group we can join? I want to contribute (proofread/fix some gramatical errors) to this novel. The story is very great and it's a shame to see the quality of the first chapters so low compared to the later ones (grammar wise, not story wise). Do let me know if there's a discord group (or your discord) I can get a hold of.
HannazRolynn:can someone give me the tags? Any NTR? yuri? Anything that will turn ppl off...?