Review Detail of Platinum_Eye in Fate: Dead Man's Lament [Rewrite Up]

Author-san, you are doing great, one of the best Fate-fanfic with Nascent Kaleidoscope. if only those Martial artists stuff wasn't there... You could have thrown all Sword styles from Mushoku, it'll raise his Swordsmanship and Water-God style can give him almost an unfair advantage over Mages while North-God style can literally turn him into a great Magus-Killer plus Apostle-hunter. Though I agree that the nerfed system gives the story a sense thrill but you could have atleast kept the inventory and leveling-up-by-killing feature. I liked nearly everything about the story till now... but don't know how it's going to be later. Still those Martial artist stuff blows up many things and various different ways... don't mind this much if you had a particular reason for doing those things, as I said before you're really doing a great work.