Well I'll say that this concept is pretty good and drew me in pretty quickly. The dynamic between the Vadrics and humans is really interesting and I commend the author for introducing it very early to capture the intrigue. So far the characters are pretty interesting and lively, even Aurelius who has that spoiled air but seems to still have a good head on his shoulders and Seraphina who I'm very curious how she'll turn out as the story progresses. the setup is good so far and aside from the writing quality being bogged down by a few grammar and punctuation issues, the story is very well written even at this early stage. Great job author.. I highly recommend this book.
Darkswan
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