Review Detail of AllThatGoodStuff in Level To Live

Author here to shamelessly leave a review and a summary of my story. I can promise good grammar and spelling. Chapter length: 1500-1800 words. This story has a levelling system and magic that you will most likely find familiar. Where I have tried to make it interesting and original is in the characters and the world-building. The Characters: There are 4 main characters who each have their own quirks, as well as problems that they will need to overcome. Four estranged flatmates will be forced to work together to survive. The main character is a young Martial arts genius who fled his family to London just before the Apocalypse began. When it comes to the main character's family, I have decided to take a look at the traditional shonen/cultivation father archetype. I will be focusing on the consequences of forcing young children to train to extremes, as well as the mentality of the type of person who would do that. The World: The earth has an expiration date and in less than half a year, it will be destroyed. Everyone who survives the initial collapse of society must cross the globe to get to eastern Europe where they can escape the Earth's destruction.