Review Detail of Wage_saga in Legend of the Isekai Breaker

Honestly, I didn't expect my novel to get bronze at WPC. I am not satisfied with this work. so I'm going to rewrite the plot. There will be changes starting from chapter 4 and above. I will also change the name of the main character, from Willy to Willis. I know it displeased, but I want to give the best for you guys.