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Review Detail of Nyareh_Grant in One Piece : White Tiger Vice Captain

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Noice I'd normally not like reading fics that follow the main plot but if it's your first story then that's fine, I just ask you have him actually change the plot and be involved not just as a bystander, also don't have him expose his knowledge as it may impead the improvement of the crew

One Piece : White Tiger Vice Captain

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i have plan on changing thin in the future