When I first read Chapter 1, I was enjoying the story. Minutes passed, and a couple of scroll downs later, I was still at Chapter 1! What volume of words, what length! And this experience continued throughout the succeeding chapters. Keep up the good work! Each chapter is jam-packed with various dialogues and multiple POVs. So you would get to know more characters. There are a couple of grammatical errors from time to time. But it could be further improved as the upload continues. So please do give this novel a try!
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