Review Detail of Cup_Of_Cappuchino in The Story of Namaru Uchiha
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Very good story overall. The character progression of Namaru seems kind of rushed but yet fun and unique. I don't think that you got Sauske nor Sarada's personalities accurately. Sauske acts more "upbeat" you could say, and Sarada is kind of lacking the flair you would see her with. Might just be me though. The first chapter felt kind of rushed but I can understand that. So far this seems like it has some pretty good potential so far. Keep it up!
The Story of Namaru Uchiha
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Liked it!
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I'm not necessarily trying to make the character personalities canon. Plus, I've never seen Boruto, so I don't know their current personalities. I even changed Sasuke's Rinnegan loss. I'm not really trying to go for Boruto canon since I don't care for Boruto as a show. I fell in love with Naruto and Sasuke, and now there's a show that's making them complete and total ants. Not having it.
I'm only referencing Boruto because it takes place after Naruto, and putting my character in that timeline would have been a huge mistake since so much has already happened there. My story even takes place after the events of Boruto. I'm not going to act as if the show never started. I will acknowledge its existence, but I still will never like it.