Review Detail of camo in The Story of Namaru Uchiha
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3 chapters are out at this time Has potential but the first chapter felt rushed, naruto is kind of all over the place (but that just might be naruto in general) mc is kind of getting everything just handed to him, maybe that will change later but right now it just feels like everyone is on his side while others dont matter? maybe its just me tho On the other hand it really made me just want to read more, so keep it up author!
The Story of Namaru Uchiha
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Thanks for the review. I try and keep my readers engrossed to the best of my ability. I'm also trying to go off of his rough backstory from my 1st book featuring that same MC. Like most younger siblings, there is a lot that is just handed to him, but not everything. It does get more difficult for him as time passes, and I will definitely try and improve on the way I write as I'm still very new to writing. My main goal is a 1500 word minimum per chapter, and 2 chapters at a time. Once again, thanks for the review, and I will definitely continue improving as I take all of my readers input, and try to change things to better suit to what they want to read if that makes sense.
