I don't know about others but for me the idea is good but the problem is the way it was presented just the first 20+ chapters feel boring I mean i appreciate your work on details and different POVs making them feel more human I guess but they are just mobs with no direct impact to the story so having this long of a chapter is so boring and kinda stupid for me I mostly skipped it surprised or unsurprised but I can still read ok I advise you author to make the chapters when its long has an impact to the story not when they are just going to die without having a impact whether to the mc or story in the future cause you will most of the readers fell asleep on the details when it is boring P.S No offense but this is really what i thought about this work of yours
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