Review Detail of Taylor9189 in The God Of Primordial Chaos

alright this is my honest review so far. WQ: the author needs to have a proof reader come behind them and fix the plentiful amount of errors. SD: the story develops at a fast pace but to many side characters can make a story feel crowded, be careful author CD: I feel like the character design could use some work on further detailing features of them US: no issue with the updates WB: more could've gone into this but it's fairly covered (ish)