Review Detail of Christine_4961 in Translucent Entity Book 1 (currently being rewritten)

Great sorry overall, it's great for ppl who likes fantasies. Very detail oriented,it helps make you visualize the story better. The update's a bit long and a huge cliffhanger,but I do know you're busy w school works.That was my commentary as a reader and the upcoming commentary is as ur friend. With that said CONGRATULATIONS bestieeee!!! IM SO PROUD OF YOUR ACHIEVEMENT!!!HAPPY 1K VIEWERS