Review Detail of RockieAuthor21 in Fenikkusu Sureiyā

The story shows so much potential and the title of the story is nice Writing Quality:4.5/5 Story Development:5/5 Character Design:5/5 Updating Stability:4.9/5 World Background:5/5 One thing which you should change is the conversation that you had written was like play(I mean when we wrote any play type story then we indicate like this, Penny:I like this one)....for more you should read others author's book so that you can gain more experience...reading forward...keep writing author[img=recommend]