Review Detail of LucienNg in No Romance, Please

Five for dedication and effort! The plot was good. I like the way you narrate the story - it was easy to understand and interesting at the same time. Only one minor thing though - maybe you should pay attention to the tense you're using. At first, it was present, but then past. I don't mind either way, but I think choosing just one would help. However, I do understand this is perhaps a one-man show (you wrote, edited, and proofread), so mistakes are bound to happen. I like what you're doing, so please keep up the good work!