First of all this is one of the best stories I have read. I have seen 's me fuc*kers trying to give you bad reviews. Just stick to your writing, its one of the best stories I have read. Believe me I have read a lot of fanfics and written some. Also I do have some points, like don't make him into Kizaru level yet. Let him fight some pirates then maybe. Also creat some conflict between his view and others Marin view, make it more interesting that way. Like his view clashing with other high-ranking marin, who will try to give him impossible task or something like that, then MC will overcome it. (You know the fun stuff) Also if you want a beta-reader for grammar or ideas I can help. Just reply to me here. I would love to help.
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