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Review Detail of Dishes in 300 Days

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Dishes
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This novel was pretty good. Despite being fairly cliché, I found the dynamic between the two characters quite enjoyable. Personally, if I was in the position of the main character, I would be terrified of forming relationships with people whose numbers were that low. Also, his 'power' basically set up the whole story. After a few chapters, it was pretty obvious it was set up to be a romantic tragedy. In my opinion, the girl's death didn't feel like it had enough build-up. Even though the whole book is basically building up to her death, it felt rushed, in a way. They're enjoying their time at that festival, but then when her somber mood is revealed, it's like she'd already made up her mind to end it. And if that's the case, I think the story could've had a better pathing if she distanced herself from him instead of going out and having a good time with him. Overall, the characters could use a little work, but everything else was really good.

300 Days

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