The Grammer is horrible you can barley make out any the sentences. The Grammer errors could be minor but it still annoys me this person seems like a 9 year old with this Grammer
Arsene_Lionheart
Liked it!
GOSTARI highly doubt English isn't your frist language the way you cary your words is definitely is American English. The reason I was writing this is because it seemed like a good find but the Grammer just annoyed me. this is because all new novels on this site are written by kids who can't write properly.
Arsene_Lionheart:bro, i already told you its my first novel and english is not my first language so, if you don't like it, don't read simple
I know I was rude Wich I am sorry for I am a Grammer nerd and I hate Grammer errors if you need help fixing the Grammer I would help since I think your book has potential
Arsene_Lionheart:nope bro, i am in french, i started to write for fun, anways thanks for your comment, i see what i can change