Review Detail of Mr_Frost94 in TO LOVE HIM!

Ok so I started this novel after it was completed. So I just gave a 5 star rating for that. Anyways, the story seems ok? It’s kinda hard to follow with the sentence structures and grammar. Some, or rather most, of the chapters are not well structured. I’m finding it hard to keep up with what is happening and staying interested. I think this story would have been great if it was written a little better. Sorry for the harsh review. I did try sticking with the story. I made it to chapter 40-something. But I have to call it quits. Hopefully, some writing revisal can be done.