Review Detail of Noobamstard in [DISCONTINUED] HP: A Bolt from the Blue

Item: [DISCONTINUED] HP: A Bolt from the Blue
Rating: 4

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NoobamstardLv132yrNoobamstard

soooooooooo it is good but the MC is more or less emotionally disconnected. Not my cup of tea but keep up the good work author.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Ashtar29

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Ashtar29AutorAshtar29

He is? I tried to make him more emotionally connected to people. I guess that's something I'll have to work on then.

2yr