Review Detail of 5paghetti_5auce in [DISCONTINUED] HP: A Bolt from the Blue

good story do far. The grammar is good and I found it well paced: at chapter 12 we are still out of Hogwarts but things happened and relationships were built. I greatly appreciate the pace at which is power and influence are growing: it feels realistic for once. Also I think the MC is a good in between of a goal obsessed person (I've read fanfics with protagonist with the same drive, lacking purpose ironically, and determination as robots) and a fun loving one. I'm looking forward for more 👍