Review Detail of Kw0z in DC: Light Human
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Man, this is trash. First off, the main character is a simp loser who justifies it by saying “she’ll be my pet”, but then he proceeds to be HER pet. Also, one second, Alice kills him and shows no remorse, and in the next second, she can’t leave him for more than five minutes. Overall, the writing is terrible.
DC: Light Human
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SwayStar:I would if I cared about writing more chapters for this ff. Good thing I don't! Tired of ff community. This was all practice for my original anyways.
Kw0zLv14Kw0z
You gotta edit or something. No one is going to read further in the story if the beginning is almost unbearable
SwayStar:? Sounds like you didn't read that far. Or read the synopsis.
SwayStarAutorSwayStar
I would if I cared about writing more chapters for this ff. Good thing I don't! Tired of ff community. This was all practice for my original anyways.
Kw0z:You gotta edit or something. No one is going to read further in the story if the beginning is almost unbearable