Review Detail of bonnie_jlxu in God Of The Horde

Item: God Of The Horde
Rating: 4.2

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I like where the story is going, it captures the attention of the readers well. There are a few grammatical errors, and the prologue is a bit heavy with exclamation marks. However, in general, this works is really interesting. Keep it up, author!

God Of The Horde

Kais_Imperium

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Kais_ImperiumAutorKais_Imperium

Thanks for the review, please keep reading, I promise that It will get better as it goes! I am new to writing and it takes hours of my day to make one chapter of atleast 4 star quality! I am also inexperienced in writing things so I apologize if dialogue, descriptions, or transistion scenes look rough or rigid, writing something is 100 times harder than reading it!

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