Review Detail of T_o_m_a_t_o711 in GREED: ALL FOR WHAT?
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A good read and the author have put great effort in it but it is unlikely to be finished even with over 10k chaps so the story going on for like a decade , drop midway or a rushed ending is to be expected.
GREED: ALL FOR WHAT?
DMadLord
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You're welcome to be as excited about this as you want, but it has a good way to go if you really want to call it a masterpiece. The english is rudimentary at best, explanations are much longer than they need to be (that means the same could be written more concisely, not that I want less details), the stakes have almost been entirely removed through the rebirth system, Legion (800,000 years of age) bickers among themselves like children, and they haven't had any significant setbacks in ages. I appreciate the scheming, but no matter how well they plan, things are prone to fail. Especially if you plot against beings beyond even your comprehension. Facing hardly any to no repercussions in such scenarios is totally unrealistic in my opinion and a huge waste if there are 9 clones that could theoretically die once in a while to reinforce how truly dangerous living in this cutthroat world is even for the protagonist. And no, I'm not talking about the dying where they reappear 2 minutes later as an exact copy. The story began with almost infinite potential but I'm saddened to report that little of it has been utilized as of yet. Also, considering the inexperience of the writer, one would expect (or at least hope for) improvements but despite it being 2 years and over 1300 chapters, the quality has not improved. In fact, an argument could be made that the opposite is the case...
SmillingDemon:If you don’t finish this and add this to the list of masterpieces that got cut off like Reverend insanity… then it is really just frustrating , antagonising and insufferable . I tell you even if my opinion isn’t exactly that important … you are a genius , an artist , a creator.. so don’t give up for yourself and for us your faithful fans.
oh ye of little faith. you are right about the duration of the book. but you are wrong about me giving up on it. I am not saying it is not possible for me to give up on it. I am just saying that this pessimistic outlook about GREED might bring about its premature ending. I have the material for the book up to the end so it is unlikely that I will quit because of lack of inspiration. but it is highly likely that I will quit when my readers don't support and have faith in me. Imagine, I am busy writing the book but you are already complaining about it ending prematurely. it is like deserters during a battle. they kill morale and can lead to a sounding defeat. do your best to support me. if I quit early after all of your support then you can complain about me. I already doubt that I will complete it. it doesn't help my confidence if you doubt me too. thanks for the review by the way.
If you don’t finish this and add this to the list of masterpieces that got cut off like Reverend insanity… then it is really just frustrating , antagonising and insufferable . I tell you even if my opinion isn’t exactly that important … you are a genius , an artist , a creator.. so don’t give up for yourself and for us your faithful fans.
DMadLord:oh ye of little faith. you are right about the duration of the book. but you are wrong about me giving up on it. I am not saying it is not possible for me to give up on it. I am just saying that this pessimistic outlook about GREED might bring about its premature ending. I have the material for the book up to the end so it is unlikely that I will quit because of lack of inspiration. but it is highly likely that I will quit when my readers don't support and have faith in me. Imagine, I am busy writing the book but you are already complaining about it ending prematurely. it is like deserters during a battle. they kill morale and can lead to a sounding defeat. do your best to support me. if I quit early after all of your support then you can complain about me. I already doubt that I will complete it. it doesn't help my confidence if you doubt me too. thanks for the review by the way.
thank you for your support. I'll try to soldier on. to be honest, I didn't know what I was getting into when I started GREED. I shouldn't have started with a project so big for my first book. I should have started with something shorter and less complex and with just one main character. but I was ignorant, naive, and hopeful. I was too excited to share the universe in my head with others to think about the implications. now it has struck me that I might be doing this for at least 5 more years. Anyways, I hope I have loyal fans like you with me every step of the way.
SmillingDemon:If you don’t finish this and add this to the list of masterpieces that got cut off like Reverend insanity… then it is really just frustrating , antagonising and insufferable . I tell you even if my opinion isn’t exactly that important … you are a genius , an artist , a creator.. so don’t give up for yourself and for us your faithful fans.
DMadLord:thank you for your support. I'll try to soldier on. to be honest, I didn't know what I was getting into when I started GREED. I shouldn't have started with a project so big for my first book. I should have started with something shorter and less complex and with just one main character. but I was ignorant, naive, and hopeful. I was too excited to share the universe in my head with others to think about the implications. now it has struck me that I might be doing this for at least 5 more years. Anyways, I hope I have loyal fans like you with me every step of the way.
SmillingDemon:Keep moving forward ! I believe in Legion shall become a concept …and your work shall be eternal !