First time writing a first-person novel, so take it easy I will get better the more I write. I'm writing a story that I would love to read. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it. Love the community, much love to authors and readers alike keep up the good work.
Plug_O_Stien
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GOSTARCompletely understandable. That's why I'm currently in the process of rewriting it all from scratch, then replacing everything at once. Look forward to it, as there won't be any of the issues you have aptly pointed out. Thank you for your input, I value honesty and criticism as it helps me identify problems.
Marian_Domnescu_2544:Too much of the "pov/3rd party change", thus it gets confusing at times. It's slow, as you wrote 80-100 chapters for around 4 months of action. How long do you plan to write this? Is this a One Piece cousin? It has also started giving "young master face slapping" vibes that are too cliché to read, which I prefer to skip. Although I have to congratulate you for picking only one love interest. Overall it is good, but I had to skip some 8th grader syndrome chapters.
maybe he'll find a sword that was the same description. This is not in the plans for now but if I think he needs a magical sword I'll be sure to take this comment into consideration. :)
I_LOVE_MEGUMIN:Will the mc have excalibur ?? Last question. If he does I hope it looks like the one from fateimage
Yes that wHat makes me lost interest Too, There are many great Female character in hp such as luna lovegood, Tonks, fleur
Khalderas:Sigh, I had to be her, didn't it?
Hermione is still the love interest, right? You did not cave into the demands of cave trolls, right?
Plug_O_Stien:There will most certainly be a couple of them during the later years.
of course, she is. still not a harem either. and it will never be. already miss writing the interaction between Tom and Hermione lol. don't worry
BreezyNovels:Hermione is still the love interest, right? You did not cave into the demands of cave trolls, right?
Plug_O_Stien:maybe he'll find a sword that was the same description. This is not in the plans for now but if I think he needs a magical sword I'll be sure to take this comment into consideration. :)