Review Detail of JManM in Frieza The Emperor of the cosmos
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Absolutely boring. The author made the mistake of starting PoV shifts before MC has done anything important. I believe that there have been only to PoV chapters from Frieza in a Frieza insert fic, and those chapters showed that the MC was effectively worse than Frieza. All the cruelty, none of the confidence.
Frieza The Emperor of the cosmos
Darkpotter
Liked it!
GOSTARRespostas3
Is this a joke? You can read any of my stories for a MC focused story with confident and competent leads. And this is a reasoned critique. The author not only squandered his premise, but failed to deliver an MC of any entertaining quality. There is a difference between lacking quality prose and lacking quality ideas, and both can be picked a part but only the later is of any utility to amateur author.
Dillon_Coontz:If your gonna hate, at least come up with a real reason cus your reasoning could be said about almost every book
I’m not saying it’s perfect i‘m not even saying it’s good i’m just saying that I have seen a lot worse and I think your being a harsh on the author, that’s all.
JManM:Is this a joke? You can read any of my stories for a MC focused story with confident and competent leads. And this is a reasoned critique. The author not only squandered his premise, but failed to deliver an MC of any entertaining quality. There is a difference between lacking quality prose and lacking quality ideas, and both can be picked a part but only the later is of any utility to amateur author.